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Classical music is not popular these days.
So fewer people prefer classical music and fewer people want to play it.
Before encouraging people to play classical music they should make sure that more people listen to classical music.
The more listeners they hear, the more people you they will be interested in playing.

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Motivation also helps in making you active in life. You will struggle more to fulfill your goals. A self-motivated person always discovers a way to understand the issues hindering the path to complete a task. Moreover, they do not require other people¡¯s support to accomplish a challenging task close to them.
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
Classical music is not popular these days.
>>> CORRECT
So fewer people prefer classical music and fewer people want to play it.
>>> CORRECT
Before encouraging people to play classical music they should make sure that more people listen to classical music.
>>> CORRECT
The more listeners they hear, the more people you they will be interested in playing.
>>> The more listeners they have, the interested people will become. 
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