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If you discovered that someone had been gossiping about you, would you confront them?

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In my case, if it is possible, I don't make any bad feelings with other people.
In my life, I had several experiences that hurt me for gossiping but, in most cases, I did't fight with opponent and clean up my feelings by myself. I think that people who hurt others by misunderstanding repeat the bad acting to whoever it is and they don't listen to others.
Also, I don't care about rumors about me spoken by bad people.
That reason is that I believe that if anyone who shared trust with me, she will know who I am and will ask me whether it is true or not.
However, from several gossiping, I learned that If bad people really don't know that they are doing bad acting, I should clearly tell them to
It is bad. I learned a fact that silence is not the only answer for both the bad people and those who will be hurt by them.

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I agree with you completely!~ 
It's very sad to hear that some people are truly mean, even when you haven't done anything to deserve their judgement. 
Nonetheless, thank you so much for sharing something about your personal life. 
I believe that you have become stronger because of these challenges, and you have become an amazing person. ^^ 

~t. Ally

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In my case, if it is possible, I don't make any bad feelings with other people.
In my life, I had several experiences that hurt me for gossiping but, in most cases, I did't fight with opponent and clean up my feelings by myself. I think that people who hurt others by misunderstanding repeat the bad acting to whoever it is and they don't listen to others.
Also, I don't care about rumors about me spoken by bad people.
That reason is that I believe that if anyone who shared trust with me, she will know who I am and will ask me whether it is true or not.
However, from several gossiping, I learned that If bad people really don't know that they are doing bad acting, I should clearly tell them to
It is bad. I learned a fact that silence is not the only answer for both the bad people and those who will be hurt by them.
>> In my case, if it is possible, I don't keep any bad feelings with other people.
In my life, I've had several experiences that hurt me because of gossiping, but in most cases, I didn't fight back against the opponent and tried to keep my feelings by myself. I think that people who hurt others by misunderstanding the situation will repeat the bad actions to whoever else comes along, and they won't listen to others.
Also, I don't care about rumors spoken by bad people about me.
The reason is that I believe that if anyone shared their trust with me, then she or he will know who I truly am and will ask me whether something they heard about is true or not.
However, from several situations wherein gossiping was involved, I learned that if bad people really don't know that they are doing something bad, I should clearly tell them that what they are doing is wrong. I learned a fact that silence is not the only answer for both the bad people and those who will be hurt by them.
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