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2021-03-16 4870

회원님의 영작문

In fact, I took a lot of scary time in my life.
The first experience is that I had a SAT test three times to enter my university.
It means I studied 2 years more compared to other students.
When my friends entered to university and enjoyed their campus life, I studied hard alone.
Accordingly, the entrance exam for university was the most scaring thing to me at that time.
At that time, I just think ‘this, too, shall pass away’
Eventually, I passed the exam I can enter my university.
From that time, if I fear doing some things, I just think ‘this, too, shall pass away.’
When I just went to Japan, I feared speaking Japanese because I couldn’t say anything.
I cried for a week after arrived but at that time I just thought ‘this, too, shall pass away’
At some point, I could speak Japanese and enjoy the life of there.
Therefore, when I fear doing some things, I just think ‘anyway it goes well’ and concentrate on the day.
If then, at some point I can see me who did some things that I did

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

You are truly an inspiration, Cleo! You must be proud of yourself. I hope you will use all those experiences as your motivation when go through hardships in the future. Well done! -Faith-
In fact, I took a lot of scary time in my life.
>> In fact, I faced a lot of scary times in my life.
The first experience is that I had a SAT test three times to enter my university.
>> The first experience was that I took the SAT test three times to enter university.
It means I studied 2 years more compared to other students.
>> It means I studied two years more compared to other students.
When my friends entered to university and enjoyed their campus life, I studied hard alone.
>> While my friends entered university and enjoyed their campus life, I studied hard alone.
Accordingly, the entrance exam for university was the most scaring thing to me at that time.
>> Accordingly, the entrance exam for university was the scariest thing to me at that time.
At that time, I just think ‘this, too, shall pass away’
>> At that time, I just thought, ‘This too shall pass!’
Eventually, I passed the exam I can enter my university.
>> Eventually, I passed the exam so I could enter university.
From that time, if I fear doing some things, I just think ‘this, too, shall pass away.’
>> From that time, when I fear doing some things, I just think, ‘This too shall pass!’
When I just went to Japan, I feared speaking Japanese because I couldn’t say anything.
>> When I went to Japan, I feared speaking Japanese because I couldn’t say anything.
I cried for a week after arrived but at that time I just thought ‘this, too, shall pass away’
>> I cried for a week after I arrived there but at that time, I just thought ‘This too shall pass!’
At some point, I could speak Japanese and enjoy the life of there.
>> At some point, I could speak Japanese and enjoyed my life there.
Therefore, when I fear doing some things, I just think ‘anyway it goes well’ and concentrate on the day.
>> Therefore, when I fear doing some things, I just think, ‘anyway, things will go well’ and I just concentrate on the day.
If then, at some point I can see me who did some things that I did
>> Then, I know at some point I can look back and see myself as someone brave who overcame those scary things.
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