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Do you feel monday blue?

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I feel also monday blue.I think everyone feels it. but someone do not feel it. it depends on the position. if he is owner and ceo of the company, he cannot feels it. because he is ennergetic and passionate on monday. i also didn"t feel monday blue long time ago. there is my lover at same office. i hated the weekend at that time, because i missed her. so i waited every monday to meet her.

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Hi Sir Mandeep! Thank you for having the time to answer the question. Here are some of the corrections, but other than that, your answers are really wonderful. Keep it up! :)

~ T. Camille


I feel also monday blue.
>> I also feel blue on Mondays.

I think everyone feels it. but someone do not feel it. 
>> I think everyone feels it, but some people don't.

it depends on the position. 
>> Sometimes, it depends on the situation.

if he is owner and ceo of the company, he cannot feels it.
>> If he owns a big company, he cannot feel it because he feels energetic and passionate on Mondays.

because he is ennergetic and passionate on monday. 
>> If he owns a big company, he cannot feel it because he feels energetic and passionate on Mondays.

i also didn"t feel monday blue long time ago. there is my lover at same office. 
>> I also didn't feel blue a long time ago when I had a lover in our office.

i hated the weekend at that time, because i missed her.
>> I hated the weekend at that time, because I missed her. ( The sentence is actually correct, but be careful of the capitalization, especially with the words "I" and "Monday". :) )

so i waited every monday to meet her.
>> I waited every Monday to meet her.
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