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Do the colors of the clothes we wear represent our mood ?

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I agree on the the question positively around 50%, And it is true with women. Most women wear colorful clothes to display their mood and like to show up their body shape. Some women wear colorful clothes to hide their weakness of body. But it is not common to most men. They just wear clothes to prepared in advance, In my case, I hate to change clothes in every Monday to go office. It sometimes bother me.
I always prepare the clothes before going to bed every Sunday night. It mostly consist of black color clothes because of guideline of the company. If I win the lottery in Sunday night, I should change the color of my Monday clothes for my office. But I Cannot it. In the future, it will be change. I am not sure, I will have to see. Thanks a lot.

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Hi Sir Mandeep! Happy Monday! Here are the corrections for your answers. Your ideas are always on point and really great. Thank you for taking the time to answer the question. Keep it up! :)
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I agree on the the question positively around 50%, And it is true with women.
>> I agree on the the question positively around 50%, and it is true with women.


Most women wear colorful clothes to display their mood and like to show up their body shape.
>> CORRECT!

Some women wear colorful clothes to hide their weakness of body.
>> Some women wear colorful clothes to hide their body imperfections, but this is not common to men.

But it is not common to most men.
>> Some women wear colorful clothes to hide their body imperfections, but this is not common to men.

They just wear clothes to prepared in advance, In my case, I hate to change clothes in every Monday to go office.
>> They just wear clothes prepared in advance, but in my case, I hate to change clothes every Monday whenever I go to the office.

It sometimes bother me.
>> It sometimes bothers me.

I always prepare the clothes before going to bed every Sunday night.
>> CORRECT!

It mostly consist of black color clothes because of guideline of the company.
>> Most of my clothes consist of the black color, because that's in the company's guidelines.

If I win the lottery in Sunday night, I should change the color of my Monday clothes for my office.
>> If I win the lottery on a Sunday night, maybe I should change the color of my office clothes on Mondays, but I think I cannot do that.

But I Cannot it.
>> If I win the lottery on a Sunday night, maybe I should change the color of my office clothes on Mondays, but I think I cannot do that.

In the future, it will be change.
>> In the future, it will change.
OR >>  In the future, it will be changed.


I am not sure, I will have to see.
>> CORRECT!

Thanks a lot.
>> CORRECT!
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