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What are the important things to remember during an emergency situation?

작성자: 권*원
2021-03-29 2128

회원님의 영작문

In the world, there are a lot of emergency situations.
It includes a lot of cases like a situation fire broke out, a situation we have to SAT test tomorrow and a situation a loved one is about to die.
In this emergency situations, one of the most important things is to be calm down.
Keep calm and think about necessary things.
If the situation is that fire broke out, we have to cover our nose and prepare for going outside.
If the situation is that we will take a SAT test tomorrow, don’t push yourself too hard and have to get to bed early.
If the situation is that our loved one is about to die, even if you are sad, you have to smile at her or him and make the loved one feel convenient.
It is a human nature that we become emotional in an emergency situation, but in times like this, keep in mind that we have to become a rational person.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Cleo! I hope you are energetic this Monday morning! Thank you for your wonderful answer. Take care!-Faith-
In the world, there are a lot of emergency situations.
>> CORRECT
It includes a lot of cases like a situation fire broke out, a situation we have to SAT test tomorrow and a situation a loved one is about to die.
>>  It includes a lot of cases like fire emergencies, SAT test preparations, loved ones' deaths, etc.
In this emergency situations, one of the most important things is to be calm down.
>> In these emergency situations, one of the most important things is to be calm.
Keep calm and think about necessary things.
>> CORRECT
OR Keep your cool and focus on your safety.
If the situation is that fire broke out, we have to cover our nose and prepare for going outside.
>> In the situation where a fire breaks out, we have to cover our nose and prepare for going outside.
If the situation is that we will take a SAT test tomorrow, don’t push yourself too hard and have to get to bed early.
>> In the situation where we need to take a SAT test the next day, we should not push ourselves too hard and have to get to bed early.
If the situation is that our loved one is about to die, even if you are sad, you have to smile at her or him and make the loved one feel convenient.
>> In the situation where our loved one is about to die, even if we are sad, we have to smile to her or him and make him or her feel at ease.
It is a human nature that we become emotional in an emergency situation, but in times like this, keep in mind that we have to become a rational person.
>> It is human nature that we become emotional in an emergency situation, but in times like this, keep in mind that we have to become a rational person.
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