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Q:What happens to a person if he doesn't read anything?
A:If someone doesn't read anything then that person will be stupid.
First, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person won't know many thing so that person will stupid.
Second, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person can't read books because there's no experience of reading something.
Last, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person can't know many situation so that person can't cope anything.

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Hello Paul,

  Thank you for taking time to answer this question. It only proves that you really wanted to improve in your English skill. Please do check and take note of the corrections for your improvement. I hope it helped you. 

Keep up the good work! 

Sincerely,
Teacher Annie (^^)


Q: What happens to a person if he doesn't read anything?

A: If someone doesn't read anything then that person will be stupid.
>>> CORRECT

First, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person won't know many thing so that person will stupid.
>>> First, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person won't know a lot of things so that person will stupid.

Second, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person can't read books because there's no experience of reading something.
>>> Second, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person can't read books because he has no experience of reading something.

Last, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person can't know many situation so that person can't cope anything.
>>> Lastly, if someone doesn't read anything, then that person will not know many situations so that person can't cope up with anything.
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