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Do you think women should be treated the same way as men? Why or why not?

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I think all people should be treated whether they are women or men. but when it comes to job, I think some of standard for women is easier than men. for example, the physical standard of police officer and firefighter is different depends on sex. I think it is unfair. even women, they can't avoid physical violence by criminal. this is not discrimination. this is different from sex. I think the standard must be same whether they are women or men.

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Hi Tobby! That's true. Gender inequality is a major controversy nowadays. Everyone should be treated the same. Although, it still might be different based on a person's capability regardless what gender they have. 

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I'm so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

I think all people should be treated whether they are women or men. 
>>I think all people should be treated the same way whether they are men or women. 

but when it comes to job, I think some of standard for women is easier than men. 
>>>But when it comes to jobs, I think the standard for women is easier than men. 

for example, the physical standard of police officer and firefighter is different depends on sex. 
>> For example, the physical standard of police officers and firefighters are different based on sex. 

I think it is unfair. even women, they can't avoid physical violence by criminal. 
>> I think it's unfair. For women, they can't avoid physical violence from criminals. 

this is not discrimination. this is different from sex. 
>> This is not discrimination it's just understanding the capabilities  of each gender. 

I think the standard must be same whether they are women or men.
>> I think the standard must be the same whether they are women or men.

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