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These days, I am interested in AI(Artificial intelligence). When I search information about AI, There are lots of information in English. Of course, I can find information in Korean, but English Information are more usable. That is my first reason to study English. After COVID-19 I want to go a trip to oversea countries. My mother will retire in next year. After her retirement, I want to go on a vacation with my parents to other countries. My parents have an experience visiting China by package program. In my case, package trip is not good. So. I want to supply nice service to my parents.

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These days, I am interested in AI(Artificial intelligence). 
>> Correct.

 When I search information about AI, There are lots of information in English. 
>>  When I search for information about AI, there are a lot of information in English. 

 Of course, I can find information in Korean, but English Information are more usable. 
>>  Of course, I can find information in Korean, but the English Information is more usable. 

 That is my first reason to study English. After COVID-19 I want to go a trip to oversea countries. 
>>  That is my first reason to study English. After COVID-19 I want to go on a trip to overseas countries. 

 My mother will retire in next year. 
>>  My mother will retire next year. 

 After her retirement, I want to go on a vacation with my parents to other countries. 
>> Correct.

 My My parents have an experience visiting China by package program.  parents have an experience visiting China by package program. 
>>  My parents have experience visiting China through a tourist package trip. 

 In my case, package trip is not good. 
>>  In my case, a tourist package trip is not good. 

 So. I want to supply nice service to my parents.
>>  So, I want to let my parents feel and enjoy the trip without being frugal about it.

 
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