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What should be the first step in changing the educational system in your country? Explain.

: I think presentation activity is very important for students. Because students have to investigate and prepare their presentation and it will help them have more acknowledge. So, students have to given chance to do presentation and search what they are interested in, talk about their opinion about topic to classmates.

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Hello, Michelle! ^^
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~ Teacher Tricia

I think presentation activity is very important for students. 
>> CORRECT!

Because students have to investigate and prepare their presentation and it will help them have more acknowledge. 
>> Because students have to investigate and prepare for their presentation, it will help their knowledge. 

So, students have to given chance to do presentation and search what they are interested in, talk about their opinion about topic to classmates.
>> So, students have to be given a chance to do presentations and search what they are interested in and talk about their opinions about the topic to classmates.

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