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How do you show your respect for other people?

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The people who I respect are my parents because they have a very proper educational philosophy about their children, and actually they practice it. For example, they give me a chance to try alone, not to help right away when I ask for help.

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Hi Sere,
To respect your parents is your duty. Your parents are the only ones who will love you always. From your childhood to this very day, your parents will give you all that you demand. You can try telling them your thoughts about those but if they do not accept your ideas, just accept and respect them. ~ Teacher Quenny
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How do you show your respect for other people?
>>How do you show your respect for other people?(Correct)
The people who I respect are my parents because they have a very proper educational philosophy about their children, and actually they practice it. 
>>The people who I respect are my parents because they have a very proper educational philosophy about their children, and actually they practice it. (Correct)
For example, they give me a chance to try alone, not to help right away when I ask for help.
>>For example, they give me a chance to try alone, not to help right away when I ask for help.(Correct)
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How do you show your respect for other people?

The people who I respect are my parents because they have a very proper educational philosophy about their children, and actually they practice it. For example, they give me a chance to try alone, not to help right away when I ask for help.
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