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I have always hopped for my mother to get good health and diet , but she didn't do the exercise
and small meals because she get even lived very poorly and at the undeveloped society at that time.
Meanwhile, she had happy life before she was passed away at ninety - three years

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I have always hopped for my mother to get good health and diet , but she didn't do the exercise
>> I have always hope for my mother to have good health and diet but she doesn't do any kind of exercise. 
and small meals because she get even lived very poorly and at the undeveloped society at that time.
>> She also has small meals because she lived a poor life in an underdeveloped society at that time. 
Meanwhile, she had happy life before she was passed away at ninety - three years
>> At the same time, she had a happy life before she passed away at ninety-three years.
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