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What do you usually do when riding a train, a subway, or a bus?

작성자: 이*현
2021-06-30 266

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I usually try to sleep in transportation listening to music through air-pot, because I need to sleep and sleeping make faster the time.
While I'm riding a bus, I shouldn't do whatever except sleeping and listening to music because I have car sickness.
I usually close my eyes in a bus for I prevent it.
But I don't have train sickness, so I can use smartphone while I'm riding a subway or train.
I do online shopping, I read a web-toon(online comic book), and I talk to my friends through Kakaotalk.
I like to have new clothes, but buying the one is a troublesome work.
Therefore, the time that I'm riding is appropriate for shopping.
I love to read a web-toon, but I don't have enough time on weekdays.
Therefore, the time is great chance to do.
In the other way, I solve some problem that it is annoying normally.
Solving a problem spend my time very much. The riding time is same to waste.
I can do the two acting at the same time, so I'm less irritated.
Even so, I hope the riding time reduces.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Kang!

It's good you did your homework today.  Don't forget to read the corrections and practice the patterns in speaking as well.  Keep it up!


-T. Maine


I usually try to sleep in transportation listening to music through air-pot, because I need to sleep and sleeping make faster the time.

>>I usually want sleep on trasportation listening to music using my earpods because I need to sleep while traveling.  Sleeping makes me feel that time moves faster.
 While I'm riding a bus, I shouldn't do whatever except sleeping and listening to music because I have car sickness.

>> While I am on a bus, I shouldn't do anything except sleeping while listening to music because I have car sickness.
 I usually close my eyes in a bus for I prevent it.

>>I usually close my eyes on a bus to avoid feeling nauseous.
 But I don't have train sickness, so I can use smartphone while I'm riding a subway or train.

>>On the other hand, I am fine riding trains, so I can use my phone while riding a subway or a train.
 I do online shopping, I read a web-toon(online comic book), and I talk to my friends through Kakaotalk.

>>I do online shopping, read a web-toon, and chat with my friends on Kakaotalk.
 I like to have new clothes, but buying the one is a troublesome work.

>>I like to have new clothes, but choosing the perfect one is troublesome.
 Therefore, the time that I'm riding is appropriate for shopping.

>>Therefore,  I find time doing my shopping while riding a subway.
 I love to read a web-toon, but I don't have enough time on weekdays.

>>I love to read web-toons, but I don't have enough time on weekdays.
 Therefore, the time is great chance to do.

>>That's why it is a great opportunity to read while traveling.
 In the other way, I solve some problem that it is annoying normally.

>>In addition, I solve some problems which are annoying.
 Solving a problem spend my time very much. The riding time is same to waste.

>>Doing so needs much of my time.  I feel that my time is wasted when I am riding and just sitting on a transport.
 I can do the two acting at the same time, so I'm less irritated.

>>I can do two things at the same time, so I fell less irritated.
 Even so, I hope the riding time reduces.

>>Even so, I hope the time I travel will be lessened.
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