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What do you usually do when riding a train, a subway, or a bus?

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I usually try to sleep in transportation listening to music through air-pot, because I need to sleep and sleeping make faster the time.
While I'm riding a bus, I shouldn't do whatever except sleeping and listening to music because I have car sickness.
I usually close my eyes in a bus for I prevent it.
But I don't have train sickness, so I can use smartphone while I'm riding a subway or train.
I do online shopping, I read a web-toon(online comic book), and I talk to my friends through Kakaotalk.
I like to have new clothes, but buying the one is a troublesome work.
Therefore, the time that I'm riding is appropriate for shopping.
I love to read a web-toon, but I don't have enough time on weekdays.
Therefore, the time is great chance to do.
In the other way, I solve some problem that it is annoying normally.
Solving a problem spend my time very much. The riding time is same to waste.
I can do the two acting at the same time, so I'm less irritated.
Even so, I hope the riding time reduces.

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Hello Kang!

It's good you did your homework today.  Don't forget to read the corrections and practice the patterns in speaking as well.  Keep it up!


-T. Maine


I usually try to sleep in transportation listening to music through air-pot, because I need to sleep and sleeping make faster the time.

>>I usually want sleep on trasportation listening to music using my earpods because I need to sleep while traveling.  Sleeping makes me feel that time moves faster.
 While I'm riding a bus, I shouldn't do whatever except sleeping and listening to music because I have car sickness.

>> While I am on a bus, I shouldn't do anything except sleeping while listening to music because I have car sickness.
 I usually close my eyes in a bus for I prevent it.

>>I usually close my eyes on a bus to avoid feeling nauseous.
 But I don't have train sickness, so I can use smartphone while I'm riding a subway or train.

>>On the other hand, I am fine riding trains, so I can use my phone while riding a subway or a train.
 I do online shopping, I read a web-toon(online comic book), and I talk to my friends through Kakaotalk.

>>I do online shopping, read a web-toon, and chat with my friends on Kakaotalk.
 I like to have new clothes, but buying the one is a troublesome work.

>>I like to have new clothes, but choosing the perfect one is troublesome.
 Therefore, the time that I'm riding is appropriate for shopping.

>>Therefore,  I find time doing my shopping while riding a subway.
 I love to read a web-toon, but I don't have enough time on weekdays.

>>I love to read web-toons, but I don't have enough time on weekdays.
 Therefore, the time is great chance to do.

>>That's why it is a great opportunity to read while traveling.
 In the other way, I solve some problem that it is annoying normally.

>>In addition, I solve some problems which are annoying.
 Solving a problem spend my time very much. The riding time is same to waste.

>>Doing so needs much of my time.  I feel that my time is wasted when I am riding and just sitting on a transport.
 I can do the two acting at the same time, so I'm less irritated.

>>I can do two things at the same time, so I fell less irritated.
 Even so, I hope the riding time reduces.

>>Even so, I hope the time I travel will be lessened.



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