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A well-balanced diet

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It will be different for everyone and home.
I guess Older adults like me have a balanced diet, but young people don't.
Young people in these days like fast food more and eat often.
In addition, young housewives also like fast and simple meals.
As you know, fast food is an unbalanced diet.
Personally, I avoid fast food and I'm trying to have a balanced diet.
I am very interested in protein and vitamins at my diet.

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Hi Eun Ha!
I feel like we haven't done this for a long time. 
I'm always glad to hear what you have to say.
Keep expressing yourself.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
It will be different for everyone and home.
>> It depends on the people and the home.
I guess Older adults like me have a balanced diet, but young people don't.
>> I guess older adults like me have a balanced diet, but young people don't.
Young people in these days like fast food more and eat often.
>> Young people these days like fast food more and they eat those kinds of food often.
In addition, young housewives also like fast and simple meals.
>> Correct
As you know, fast food is an unbalanced diet.
>> As you know, fast food doesn't contribute to a well-balanced diet.
Personally, I avoid fast food and I'm trying to have a balanced diet.
>> Correct
I am very interested in protein and vitamins at my diet.
>> I am very interested in protein and vitamins in my diet.
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