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August 4th Wednesday homework

1. I can't see the screen, could you swap places?
2. I'll trade places with you.
3. I exchanged places with him.
4. I play the piano quite well.
5. When I get old, I want to live in a quiet downtown in the countryside.


August 5th Tuesday homework

1. I go to the cinema once a month with my daughter.
2. The movie industry is not making money
because of Corona19
3. I can't make sentences with spoilers words.
I'm sorry ¤Ð¤Ð
4. The movie "Boss baby" is computer generated.
5. Moviegoers always wait for a new movie.



I forgot my homework yesterday, so I did it with my homework today. ^^

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Here are your corrected compositions, Joy!
I appreciate your sending them. Don't worry too much if you failed to send your homework as scheduled. Just send your homework anytime but I hope you can send them separately next time. Anyway, you are allowed to send 3 compositions per day. See you tomorrow!

Cheers,
Jean~~

August 4th Wednesday homework

1. I can't see the screen, could you swap places?
>> I can't see the screen, could we swap places?

2. I'll trade places with you.
>> CORRECT~~

3. I exchanged places with him.
>> CORRECT~~

4. I play the piano quite well.
>> OR: I play the piano fairly well. 

5. When I get old, I want to live in a quiet downtown in the countryside.
>> When I get old, I want to live in a quiet place downtown. 
>>  Downtown is either the lower, or the business center of a city or town. Countryside is a rural place. So in your sentence, if you used "downtown" meaning business center, then it contradicts the meaning of countryside, unless you meant the lower part of a small town. 

August 5th Tuesday homework

1. I go to the cinema once a month with my daughter.
>> CORRECT~~ 

2. The movie industry is not making money because of Corona19.
>> OR: The movie industry is losing revenue due to the pandemic. 

3. I can't make sentences with spoilers words.
I'm sorry ¤Ð¤Ð
>> Spoiler(s) is a description of an important plot development in a television show, movie, or book which if previously known may reduce surprise or suspense for a first-time viewer or reader.
>> Example sentence: I want to know the ending of the movie Boss Baby. I don't care about spoilers because I'm still going to watch the movie regardless of the ending. 
>> Another example: I don't like reading comments on movies, dramas, or books I haven't watched or read yet because I don't want to accidentally see spoilers. 

4. The movie "Boss baby" is computer generated.
>> The baby in the movie Boss baby is computer generated.

5. Moviegoers always wait for a new movie.
>> Another example: I saw a long queue of moviegoers waiting to buy their tickets. 

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