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영작교정 게시판

영어 말하기와 쓰기를 동시에 잡는다!

자신 있게 쓸 수 있는 영작문을 위해 파워잉글리쉬 수업을 수강하시는
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또는 강사님이 내주시는 과제를 회원님께서 영어로 작성해주시면,
담당 강사 님께서 ‘문법 오류 교정’ 과 ‘더 나은 영어식 표현’으로 교정해주는
서비스 입니다.

Introduction script in interview

작성자: 이*현
2021-08-09 275

회원님의 영작문

Hello, my name is Lee Kang Hyeon, and I’m forth grade. My major is environmental engineering.
My goal is to be an expert. I think environmental engineering is a complicated major of many countries’ technologies. So I need to study in another advanced country. It Is why I applied this program.
I have many leader experiences of contests, competitions, supporters, school clubs.
Many people said they are comfortable with me. I can start conversation with new people, and I can easily carry out a project through good ways.
So this skills and experiences will help me to adapt in new society.
Specially, Finland education have many team project. When I face the project class, I will carry out smoothly.

*please let me know what contents are needed and omit. I don't know how to write ending sentences.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Kang!

I am so pleased to help you with your answers for the interview.  Let's practice the answers in class.  Don't forget to use some expressions as well.  Act naturally when you are reading ang saying the answers. 


-T. Maine


Hello, my name is Lee Kang Hyeon, and I’m forth grade. My major is environmental engineering.

>>Hello! My name is Lee Kang Hyeon and I'm in my fourth year in the university. My major is environmental engineering.
 My goal is to be an expert. I think environmental engineering is a complicated major of many countries’ technologies.

>>My goal is to be a professional and become an expert in this job.  I think environmental engineering is a complicated major in many countries that study technology.

 So I need to study in another advanced country. It Is why I applied this program.

>>So I need to study in an another advanced country.  That is the reason I applied for this program.
 I have many leader experiences of contests, competitions, supporters, school clubs.

>>I have many leader experiences from contests, competitions, supporters, and school clubs.
 Many people said they are comfortable with me. I can start conversation with new people, and I can easily carry out a project through good ways.

>>Many people said they are comfortable going along with me. I can start a conversation with new people and I can easily carry out a project in many good ways.
 So this skills and experiences will help me to adapt in new society.

>>So these skills and experiences will help me adapt in the new society.
 Specially, Finland education have many team project. When I face the project class, I will carry out smoothly.
>>I choose Finland because the education system has many team projects, and when I attend the class, I can carry out the activities smoothly.


I would like you to include your personality, like "I am a diligent and passionate about my chosen career in the future."

And you may conclude by saying, "These are the reasons I applied for this program."

You can delete that sentence which you said earlier so it won't be the same. :)


 *please let me know what contents are needed and omit. I don't know how to write ending sentences.

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