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I couldn't my class on Monday because my older daughter went back to Japan so my families saw her off at the airport.
She spent lots of money to cure dental, oriental medicine and pocket money.
Because she could not come to Korea for 2 years.
It is difficult that a weak girl like her is studying abroad alone
It takes long times to departure and entry procedures at the airport.
Even though we have the negative certificate of Corona , we have to take many additional tests.

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Hello Ms. Lily! Don't worry about that, I fully understand that students missed some class because of some urgent matters.
I  guess you'll miss your daughter a lot. :) Be strong for your daughter. Stay well and happy.
~Aki:)
I couldn't my class on Monday because my older daughter went back to Japan so my families saw her off at the airport.
>>> I didn't do my class today because my older daughter went back to Japan and my family send her off at the airport.
>>>  I was not able to do the class today because my family sends our older daughter off to Japan at the airport.
She spent lots of money to cure dental, oriental medicine and pocket money.
>>> She spent a lot of money on her dental care. Oriental medicine and some pocket money.
Because she could not come to Korea for 2 years.
>>> Because she couldn't come back here in Korea for two years.
It is difficult that a weak girl like her is studying abroad alone
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> It's hard for me to see that a weak girl like her is studying abroad by herself.
It takes long times to departure and entry procedures at the airport.
>>> It takes a long time for departure and entry procedures at the airport.
Even though we have the negative certificate of Corona, we have to take many additional tests.
>>>CORRECT
OR >>Regardless of the negative certificate of Corona, We still need to undergo series of tests.
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