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회원님의 영작문

The recent exhibition I have been to was 'My Dear Pinocchio'
The fairy tale "The Adventures of Pinocchio" that we know is the most translated book after the Bible.
There are Pinocchio illustrations drawn by various artists with various materials on display.
Do you know a fairy tale writer named Anthony Brown? He's the author of many fairy tales that I read when I was a child, for example, "GORILA," "Piggy Book." It was very nice to see his Pinocchio paintings in the exhibition.
It's fun to see new and historic paintings, but I think it's more fun to see familiar and interesting paintings.
In the past, art museums used to be recognized as a place for people who are interested in art, but recently, the accessibility of art exhibitions through the Internet has increased and the interior has been well decorated to suit modern people's taste, allowing many people to enjoy culture and art freely.

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Hello Jessica! 
Thank you for your homework! The exhibition of "My Dear Pinocchio" sounds so lovely and magical. And oh! I didn't know that Pinocchio was the most translated book after the Bible! It's great that art exhibitions have become accessible to more people because of the internet. It's great that more people would get the chance to appreciate art. 
~T.Angelica 
The recent exhibition I have been to was 'My Dear Pinocchio'
>> CORRECT. 
The fairy tale "The Adventures of Pinocchio" that we know is the most translated book after the Bible.
>> CORRECT.
OR>> The fairy tale "The Adventures of Pinocchio" is the most translated book after the Bible. 
There are Pinocchio illustrations drawn by various artists with various materials on display.
>> There were Pinocchio illustrations drawn by various artists using various materials on display. 
Do you know a fairy tale writer named Anthony Brown? He's the author of many fairy tales that I read when I was a child, for example, "GORILA," "Piggy Book." 
>>He's the author of many fairy tales that I read when I was a child, such as "GORILA," and "Piggy Book." 
It was very nice to see his Pinocchio paintings in the exhibition.
>>CORRECT. 
It's fun to see new and historic paintings, but I think it's more fun to see familiar and interesting paintings.
>>CORRECT. 
In the past, art museums used to be recognized as a place for people who are interested in art, but recently, the accessibility of art exhibitions through the Internet has increased and the interior has been well decorated to suit modern people's taste, allowing many people to enjoy culture and art freely.
>>In the past, art museums used to be recognized as a place for art aficionados only, but recently, the accessibility of art exhibitions through the internet has increased, allowing more people to see them. 
>>Museum interiors have been decorated as well to suit modern people's taste, allowing more people to enjoy culture and art freely. 
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