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Do you prefer Korean cars or foreign cars? Share your thoughts in a short paragraph.

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I prefer Korean cars to foreign cars because of several reasons.

First, I am a Korean so I think I have to help Korean companies by consuming Korean cars.
Second, when I buy a foreign car it will be very inconvenient for me to fix it.
Third, foreign cars like BMW and Mercedes-Benz are more expensive than Korean cars.

These days young generations likely spend beyond their budget when they purchase their cars. So they drive more expensive cars than my husband. He and I earn enough money but we want to spend our money reasonably. So if I have to buy II will buy a Korean car.

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Weekend greetings Joshua!

There are so many car brands out there in the market. As consumers, we have a wide variety of car brands to choose from. As your country manufactures your own car brands, it is wise to support them by patronizing their models. Since you have used some Korean cars for a long time, you can attest to their safety, convenience, and reliability.

I am confident that your future car will also be Korean made. Anyway, thank you for sharing your answer here on the composition page. The rule that you sent me as I conferred to the Cambridge grammar version are the same (https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/grammar/british-grammar/prefer)

Thank you for your query and clarification in class.


Enjoy your time this weekend!

-T. Donna =)

I prefer Korean cars to foreign cars because of several reasons.
>> Correct!

First, I am a Korean so I think I have to help Korean companies by consuming Korean cars.
>> Correct!

Second, when I buy a foreign car it will be very inconvenient for me to fix it.
>> Correct!

Third, foreign cars like BMW and Mercedes-Benz are more expensive than Korean cars.
>> Correct!

These days young generations likely spend beyond their budget when they purchase their cars. 
>> Correct!

So they drive more expensive cars than my husband. 
>> Correct!

He and I earn enough money but we want to spend our money reasonably. 
>> Correct!

So if I have to buy II will buy a Korean car.
>> Correct!
Or: So if I have to buy, I will buy a Korean car.)
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