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I don't think there's been a great president yet. That's because I don't really like any president.

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Hi Yu Bi! ^^

Most people usually have different opinion regarding this topic. Every president is different in their own ways. All of them have different advocacies. There is also no president that is perfect. Thanks for sharing your opinion. 

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I don't think there's been a great president yet. 
>> I don't think there hasn't been a great president. 

That's because I don't really like any president.
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