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Is it better to be a teenager today or during your time?

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If I have a chance to choose childhood of mine or my son's, I would choose my son's childhood. My time was hard to live. That time my parents didn't know how to support their children, and they didn't have enough money to support us. So, they had pushed me to study hard, but they didn't know why do I study hard. Of course, I didn't know. But now, I know why do people study hard. I have explained about it to my son.(Even if people know the reason of studying, people hate to study.) I have shown the world to my son. My son will have a big dream than me.

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Hi Hwanny, 
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts with me. Your children are lucky to have a father like you :) 
See you next week. Have a nice weekend! 
Regards,
T. Angelica 
If I have a chance to choose childhood of mine or my son's, I would choose my son's childhood. 
>>If I had a chance to choose between my childhood or my son's, I would choose my son's childhood. 
My time was hard to live. 
>> It was hard to live during my time. 
That time my parents didn't know how to support their children, and they didn't have enough money to support us. 
>> During those times, my parents didn't know how to support their children and they didn't have enough money to support us. 
So, they had pushed me to study hard, but they didn't know why do I study hard. 
>> So, they had pushed me to study hard but they didn't know why I had to study hard. 
Of course, I didn't know. But now, I know why do people study hard. 
>>Of course, I didn't know. But now, I understand why people study hard. 
I have explained about it to my son.(Even if people know the reason of studying, people hate to study.) 
>>I have explained this to my son. (Even if people know the importance of studying, people still hate to study.) 
OR>>I have talked about it to my son. 
I have shown the world to my son. 
>> CORRECT
My son will have a big dream than me.
>>My son will be able to dream bigger than me. 
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