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Self introduction

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Hi. I¡¯m glad to study with you. Thanks to read my self introduction. I¡¯m happy to introduce myself to you.
My name is Lee min ji. I¡¯m from seoul,Korea. My major is Children¡¯s studies. Beacuse I like to play and take time with kids.
I¡¯m an only child. But I¡¯m not feel lonely because my cousin live near my house. And I¡¯m an active person. So I like to go out and play with my friends. But when we first met, I was shy so I needed time to get close. My hobby is baking. I usually make cakes and cookies. My goal is to get a good score in this semester. And I meet my friends or spend time with my family in my free time.
Thank you for reading it. Let¡¯s get along well this semester.

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Hi Minji, thank you for this. Have a great day! 
Jasmin 


Hi. I¡¯m glad to study with you.
>>Hi, I'm glad to be studying with you. 
Thanks to read my self introduction.
>>Thanks for reading my self introduction. 
I¡¯m happy to introduce myself to you.
>>I'm happy to introduce myself to you. 
My name is Lee min ji.
>>My name is Lee Min Ji. 
I¡¯m from seoul,Korea.
>>I'm from Seoul, Korea. 
 My major is Children¡¯s studies.
>>My major is Child's studies. 
Beacuse I like to play and take time with kids.
>>Because I love to play and spend time with kids. 
I¡¯m an only child.
>>I'm the only child. 
But I¡¯m not feel lonely because my cousin live near my house.
>>But I don't feel lonely because my cousin live near my house. 
And I¡¯m an active person.
>>And I'm an active person.
 So I like to go out and play with my friends.
>>So I like to go out and play with my friends. 
But when we first met, I was shy so I needed time to get close.
>>But when we first met I was shy and I needed some time to be comfortable.
 My hobby is baking.
>>My hobby is baking. 
I usually make cakes and cookies.

>>I usually bake cakes and cookies.
My goal is to get a good score in this semester.
>>My goal is to get a good grades this semester. 
And I meet my friends or spend time with my family in my free time.
>>I also spend my free time with my family and friends. 
Thank you for reading it.
>>Thank you for reading.
Let¡¯s get along well this semester.
>>Let's get a long well this semester. 
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