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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their

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회원님의 영작문

It really difficult for me to distinguish where people are from at first sight. I can only tell about people's culture if they are wearing Arabic clothes like Abaya. However, I don't think that people can judge someone's character without basic knowledge of their country. Most people around world get an education from elementary school to high school according to the country's curriculum and it is mandatory by the law in most countries. It might be possible to tell person's culture with their appearances before but in modern society, everything has changed quickly and globalization make people similar. Many people shared their culture and implemented it in their country. We can see same fashion style in the world so I don't think it is possible to say who they are. People's character also varies on the nations. Asians have similar culture and Americans, Europeans also have their own culture. I guess that the effective way is having a talk and then they can get to know each other.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good day to you Mr. Hwang! ^^ It's nice to have a conversation with you today! I appreciate your essays too! ^^ Keep it up!
>>> TEACHER GEMMA
It really difficult for me to distinguish where people are from at first sight. 
>>> It's really difficult for me to distinguish where people are from at first sight. 
I can only tell about people's culture if they are wearing Arabic clothes like Abaya. 
>>> CORRECT
However, I don't think that people can judge someone's character without basic knowledge of their country.
>>> CORRECT
 Most people around world get an education from elementary school to high school according to the country's curriculum and it is mandatory by the law in most countries.
>>>  Most people around the world get an education from elementary school to high school according to the country's curriculum and it is mandatory by the law in most countries.
 It might be possible to tell person's culture with their appearances before but in modern society, everything has changed quickly and globalization make people similar. 
>>>  It might be possible to tell the person's culture with their appearances before but in modern society, everything has changed quickly and globalization make people similar. 
Many people shared their culture and implemented it in their country.
>>> CORRECT
 We can see same fashion style in the world so I don't think it is possible to say who they are.
>>>  We can see the same fashion style in the world so I don't think it is possible to tell who they are.
 People's character also varies on the nations. 
>>> CORRECT
Asians have similar culture and Americans, Europeans also have their own culture. 
>>> CORRECT
I guess that the effective way is having a talk and then they can get to know each other.
>>> I guess that the most effective way is having a talk and then they can get to know each other.
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