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Do you think a high English language proficiency level is needed?

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2021-10-24 307

회원님의 영작문

It is widely known that the English as an official language is the most useful language to communicate generally with global community members.
Some people think that development of translation devices can bring about overcome of the language barrier.
However, in my opinion, it is necessary for people who is not native english to elevate the english language proficiency for global communication and business.
As globalization accelerates, bilateral cooperation between governments is becoming more active, trade volume between countries is increasing, and many multinational companies are also emerging.
According to the global trend of the international cooperation and trade, recently many companies and government officese in Korea have been demanding certified English grades such as TOEIC, TEPs from job applicants.
Therefore, It can be said that english language proficiency is not a selection but a necessity especially for the Korean students and job seekers.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good morning Hag Jin! 
The use of English as an International language is growing with time because it is the only medium for communication in many countries. English is also used widely in the literature and media section to publish books, most of the writers write in the English language due to the vast majority of readers know only the English language and they can describe their ideas best in the English language.

Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate the effort and the skill too :) 

It is widely known that the English as an official language is the most useful language to communicate generally with global community members.
>>> It is widely known that English as an official language is the most useful language for communicating with global members in general.
Some people think that development of translation devices can bring about overcome of the language barrier.
>>> Some people think that the development of translation devices can overcome language barriers.
However, in my opinion, it is necessary for people who is not native english to elevate the english language proficiency for global communication and business.
>>> However, I think it is necessary for non-English speakers to improve their English skills for global communication and business.
As globalization accelerates, bilateral cooperation between governments is becoming more active, trade volume between countries is increasing, and many multinational companies are also emerging.
>>> As globalization accelerates, mutual cooperation between governments is active, trade volume between countries increases, and multinational corporations are also emerging.
According to the global trend of the international cooperation and trade, recently many companies and government officese in Korea have been demanding certified English grades such as TOEIC, TEPs from job applicants.
>>> According to the global trend of the international cooperation and trade, recently many companies and government offices in Korea have been demanding certified English grades such as TOEIC, TEPs from job applicants.
OR: In line with the global trend of international cooperation and trade, many Korean companies and government agencies have recently demanded employment applicants for accredited English grades such as TOEIC and TEP.
Therefore, It can be said that english language proficiency is not a selection but a necessity especially for the Korean students and job seekers.
>>> Therefore, English skills are not an option but a necessity for Korean students and job seekers.

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