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Of course, I will keep on attending this class until fluently speaking English. But my class time will be changed at 10PM next year. I appreciate you for teaching me so far. and thank you for calling me Bo Geom. also, I will be a mechanic of aircraft maintenance at Korean Air. It's my goal. So I'm going to keep trying. Happy new year~

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Hello Hyeon! I appreciate your enthusiasm for this class.  I truly admire your effort despite being busy at work, you still manage to do your homework. Keep it up! your passion will lead you to success. We will still see each other on Monday, do not say goodbye yet :)
~T. Aki ^^
Of course, I will keep on attending this class until fluently speaking English. 
>>> Of course, I will keep on attending this class until I become fluent in English.
>>> Of course, I will keep on attending this class until I can speak English fluently.
But my class time will be changed at 10PM next year. 
>>> CORRECT!
I appreciate you for teaching me so far. and thank you for calling me Bo Geom. 
>>> So far, I appreciate you for teaching me and thank you for calling me Bo Geom.
also, I will be a mechanic of aircraft maintenance at Korean Air. It's my goal. So I'm going to keep trying. Happy new year~
>>> My goal is to become a Mechanic of Aircraft maintenance in Korean Air. So I'm going to keep trying. Happy New Year!
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