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What would you do if you had to travel to a country where its peopledon\'t know how to speak neithe

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In my opnion, there are three ways to communicate with them. First, of course, I should use translation app in my phone to communicate with them. This way is not perfect but it doesn't cost and it is convenient. I would try my best to convey my feeling and intention. Second, if there is a situation like that I Iose my phone and can't buy new one or borrow one, I would employ my guide who can speak both my language and language of this country. If I use this method, I could travel comfortably with my guide but it is expensive. Lastly, in case of that I can't use the above-mentioned ways, I would use body language. It unexpectedly works well. In Thailand, a long time ago, I did that and It worked well. Some people may think it is a shameful behavior. However, in fact, when you do body language to foreign people, they don't think so. I know the truth because I don't think so when I meet foreign people who do body language. I feel enthusiasm of them about communicating with me

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Hello Kevin!
Nice one in answering this query.  But check your spelling before submitting your homework.  Be familiar with the vocabulary you use.  Keep on practicing! ^^

~T. Maine


In my opnion, there are three ways to communicate with them. 
>>In my opinion, there are three ways to communicate with them. 
First, of course, I should use translation app in my phone to communicate with them. 
>>First, of course, I should use a translation app on my phone to communicate with them. 
This way is not perfect but it doesn't cost and it is convenient. 
>>This way is not perfect but it doesn't cost a penny and it is convenient. 
I would try my best to convey my feeling and intention. 
>>Correct. 
Second, if there is a situation like that I Iose my phone and can't buy new one or borrow one, I would employ my guide who can speak both my language and language of this country. 
>>Second, in certain situations like when I lose my phone and can't buy a new one or borrow from someone, I will find and hire a tour guide who can speak my language and the country's language. 
If I use this method, I could travel comfortably with my guide but it is expensive. 
>>Correct.
Lastly, in case of that I can't use the above-mentioned ways, I would use body language. 
>>Lastly, in case I can't use any of the above-mentioned ways, I would use body language. 
It unexpectedly works well. 
>>Correct. 
In Thailand, a long time ago, I did that and It worked well. 
>>A long time ago when I was in Thailand, I did that and it worked well for me. 
Some people may think it is a shameful behavior. 
>>Some people may think it is shameful. 
However, in fact, when you do body language to foreign people, they don't think so. 
>>In fact, when you use body language with foreigners, they don't think so. 
I know the truth because I don't think so when I meet foreign people who do body language. 
>>I know the truth because I don't care when I meet foreigners who communicate using body language. 
I feel enthusiasm of them about communicating with me
>>I feel enthusiasm when I communicate with them. 
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