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Which greeting kind of annoys you?

I think saying 'yo~~~' this sentence can annoy me.
When I meet my close freiends, I usually say 'yo~~'. I think this makes our relationship closer.
Someone can think this is not polite very much, but I use just in close relationship, so they don't have to worry.
Waving hands also can annoy me in online platform. We cannot skake our head(?)(which is Korean culture) for greeting, so when meeting in ZOOM, I usually do wave my hands.

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Hi, Yoon Su!
I read your homework and I have to say, I agree. For close relationships, we really have a special way to greet each other that other people may think of as rude, but for us, that is showing that we are close to that person. Great Job in answering your homework. Keep it up.
-T.Caitlyn
Which greeting kind of annoys you?
>>correct
I think saying 'yo~~~' this sentence can annoy me.
>>I think saying "yo" can annoy me.
When I meet my close freiends, I usually say 'yo~~'. 
>>I usually greet my friends by saying "yo" when we meet.
I think this makes our relationship closer.
>>correct
Someone can think this is not polite very much, but I use just in close relationship,
>>Someone might think that this is impolite but I only use this to greet people that are in a close relationship with me.
so they don't have to worry.
>>So, they don't have to worry.
Waving hands also can annoy me in online platform.
>>Waving hands can also annoy me in online platforms.
 We cannot skake our head(?)(which is Korean culture) for greeting,
>>We cannot bow our head like the usual way of greeting here in Korea.
 so when meeting in ZOOM, I usually do wave my hands.
>>So during Zoom meetings, I usually just wave my hands.
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