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- What was your most memorable weekend? Answer in 2-3 sentences.

last Christmas, I spend a vacation at a hotel with my friend. Spending a vacation at a hotel have been all the range in Korea since Covid -19. It calls "Hocance" (hotel + vacance)


Donna! I always grateful teach me. I got a mistake the question. My dog name is "Gureum" not "Gorum". lol (I'm sorry for confusion.
I thought that because he was so loud. )
Gureum is mean cloud in Korea. he is so fluffy and soft like cloud. and He is chamming and lovely for family. but he angry other people at all time. lol If l have a time, I will introduce him. thank you Donna!!

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Hello, Hae Ju!

First of all, I'm grateful for your homework answer and the photo of your Gureum here on this page! Also, I apologize for the confusion in the name of Gureum. I think I even pronounced it wrongly. Nonetheless, I cannot wait to meet him!

Anyway, it's wonderful to know that you take your vacation whenever you can. I wonder if you could bring Gureum with you when he keeps on barking at everyone. ^^ I really think that Gureum is a special dog and I believe I will meet him soon.

It's my pleasure to teach you! Thank you for being an excellent student!

See you soon!

-T. Donna =)

last Christmas, I spend a vacation at a hotel with my friend. 
>> Correct!
Or: Last Christmas, I spent a vacation at a hotel with my friend. 

Spending a vacation at a hotel have been all the range in Korea since Covid -19. It calls "Hocance" (hotel + vacance)
>> Spending a vacation at a hotel have all the ranges in Korea since COVID -19. It called "Hocance" (hotel + vacance).


Donna! I always grateful teach me. 
>> Donna! I always grateful to you for teaching me. 

I got a mistake the question. 
>> I got a mistake with your question.

My dog name is "Gureum" not "Gorum". lol
>> My dog's name is "Gureum" not "Gorum".

(I'm sorry for the confusion. I thought that because he was so loud. )
>> (I'm sorry for the confusion. I thought that it's because he was so loud. )

Gureum is mean cloud in Korea. 
>> Gureum means cloud in Korea. 

he is so fluffy and soft like cloud. 
>> Correct!

and He is chamming and lovely for family. 
>> And, he us charming and lovely for our family.

but he angry other people at all time. lol
>> But he was angry to other people at all times.

If l have a time, I will introduce him. thank you Donna!!
>> Correct!
Or: If l have a time, I will introduce him. Thank you, Donna!

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