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About ten years ago, a minister of Education formulated a new policy.
If students want to go to the uiversities, everyone can go to university. He built so many universities even samall town.
As a result 80% of high school graduat went to the university.
After they entered university, so many students prepare for civil servent exams for several years.

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Hi, Ms. Lily!
I have read your homework. I agree with you that some universities do not build their students up. It would be nice if the government would be able to reach out and find the "real need" of each universities. Thanks for sharing!
Aki~
About ten years ago, a minister of Education formulated a new policy.
>>> About ten years ago, the Minister of Education formulated a new policy.
If students want to go to the uiversities, everyone can go to university.
>>> If students want to go to the universities, they can go.
>>> Everyone can go to the university if they want to.
He built so many universities even samall town.
>>> He built so many universities even in small towns.
As a result 80% of high school graduat went to the university.
>>> As a result, 80% of high school graduates went to the university.
After they entered university, so many students prepare for civil servent exams for several years.
>>> After they entered the university, so many students prepare for the civil servant exams for several years.
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