¹«·á ·¹º§Å×½ºÆ® ¹Þ°í °­»çÆò°¡ ³²±â¸é 1,OOO¿ø ÄíÆù Áï½Ã Àû¸³!

Ȥ½Ã »çÀÌÆ®¿¡¼± ãÁö ¸øÇÑ ±Ã±ÝÇÑ Á¡ÀÌ ÀÖÀ¸¼¼¿ä?
³²°ÜÁֽŠÀ̸ÞÀÏÀ» ÅëÇØ ´äº¯ µå¸®°Ú½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®ÀÇÇϽг»¿ëÀÌ ¹®ÀÚ·Î ¹ß¼ÛµÇ¿À´Ï
¿¬¶ôó¸¦ ³²°ÜÁÖ¼¼¿ä.
¾÷¹«½Ã°£ ¿ù~±Ý ¿ÀÀü9½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ6½Ã
(Á¡½É½Ã°£ ³·12½Ã~¿ÀÈÄ1½Ã)

¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇ

¿µ¾î ¸»Çϱâ¿Í ¾²±â¸¦ µ¿½Ã¿¡ Àâ´Â´Ù!

ÀڽŠÀÖ°Ô ¾µ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ¿µÀÛ¹®À» À§ÇØ ÆÄ¿öÀ×±Û¸®½¬ ¼ö¾÷À» ¼ö°­ÇϽôÂ
ȸ¿ø´Ôµé²² ¹«·á·Î Á¦°øÇص帮´Â ºÎ°¡ ¼­ºñ½º·Î, Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ ÀÚÀ¯ ÁÖÁ¦
¶Ç´Â °­»ç´ÔÀÌ ³»Áֽô °úÁ¦¸¦ ȸ¿ø´Ô²²¼­ ¿µ¾î·Î ÀÛ¼ºÇØÁֽøé,
´ã´ç °­»ç ´Ô²²¼­ ¡®¹®¹ý ¿À·ù ±³Á¤¡¯ °ú ¡®´õ ³ªÀº ¿µ¾î½Ä Ç¥Çö¡¯À¸·Î ±³Á¤ÇØÁÖ´Â
¼­ºñ½º ÀÔ´Ï´Ù.

Generation gap

ÀÛ¼ºÀÚ: ±è*À±
2022-05-06 275

ȸ¿ø´ÔÀÇ ¿µÀÛ¹®

I don't think kids these days are having a better childhood than my generation. Because these days it's hard to play outside because of the corona virus, and the internet is so developed that kids learn bad things too quickly.

°­»ç´ÔÀÇ Ã·»è±³Á¤ ³»¿ë

Hello,  Sheila! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next week! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


I don't think kids these days are having a better childhood than my generation. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because these days it's hard to play outside because of the corona virus, and the internet is so developed that kids learn bad things too quickly.
>>> Because these days it's hard to play outside because of the coronavirus, and the internet is so developed that kids learn bad things too quickly.
¹øÈ£ Á¦¸ñ ±Û¾´ÀÌ °ø°³ »óÅ µî·ÏÀÏ Á¶È¸¼ö
118817 5/6 HOMEWORK (IT\'S... ÀÌ*À¯ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 261
118816 HOMEWORK ¹Ú*¹Î ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 2
118815 homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 287
118814 Right? ±è*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 2
118813 Generation gap ±è*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 275
118812 What were you afraid of as a child? ½Å*ÈÄ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 340
118811 My Homework °­*¿ì ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 230
118810 What is your opinion about the effects of language barrier... Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 421
118809 Homework ±è*Çõ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 388
118808 Homework ±è*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 214
118807 homework ÃÖ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 186
118806 homework ÃÖ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 268
118805 homework ÃÖ*¿ø ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 274
118804 Homework ±â*Çö ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 215
118803 What is one dilemma you have nowadays? Answer in a few sentences. ÀÌ*¿¬ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 235
118802 What (besides good food) makes a restaurant great? Ȳ*ÇÏ ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 276
118801 How about you? ÀÓ*À± ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 457
118800 Homework ¹Ú*Àº ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 1
118799 For you, do you prefer the idea of extended or nuclear families? ¿À*ºó ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 299
118798 5.3 Àü* ¿Ï·á 2022-05-06 363

HOW TO USE IT?

[¸¶ÀÌÆäÀÌÁö > ¼ö¾÷ ³»¿ë º¸±â > ÇнÀ ͏°´õ > ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ ¹öư Ŭ¸¯]

¼ö¾÷ Ƚ¼ö¸¸Å­ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀÌ »ý¼ºµÇ¸ç,
Áö³­ ³¯Â¥¿¡µµ °Ô½Ã ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

ÁÖ5ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 20ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ3ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 12ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
ÁÖ2ȸ ¼ö¾÷ : ¿ù 08ȸ ÀÌ¿ë °¡´É
01
±³Á¤ ³»¿ëÀº ÃÖ´ë 1,000byte±îÁö ¿Ã¸± ¼ö ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.

÷ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ¿øÈ°ÇÑ Ã·»èÀ» À§ÇÑ Âü°íÀÚ·á·Î »ç¿ëµÉ »Ó,
ÆÄÀÏ¿¡ ´ëÇÑ Ã·»èÀº ºÒ°¡´É ÇÕ´Ï´Ù.

¾÷·Îµå °¡´ÉÇÑ Ã·ºÎ ÆÄÀÏÀº ÃÖ´ë 2mb±îÁöÀ̸ç,
÷ºÎ ÇÒ ¼ö ÀÖ´Â ÆÄÀÏ Çü½ÄÀº ´ÙÀ½°ú °°½À´Ï´Ù.

¹®¼­ - PDF, TXT, DOCX,
À̹ÌÁö - JPEG, PNG, GIF
02
Àü¹® ºÐ¾ß¸¦ Á¦¿ÜÇÑ È¸¿ø´ÔÀÌ Á÷Á¢ ÀÛ¼ºÇÑ ±Û¸¸
÷»èÀÌ °¡´ÉÇϸç,

¿Ã·ÁÁֽбÛÀÇ °­»ç´Ô ÷»èÀº 24½Ã°£ À̳»¿¡
¿Ï·á µÇ´Â °ÍÀ» ¿øÄ¢À¸·Î Çϰí ÀÖ½À´Ï´Ù.
03
ÇÏ·ç °Ô½Ã °¡´ÉÇÑ ±ÛÀº 3ȸ±îÁö À̸ç,
Á¾·áµÈ ¼ö¾÷ÀÇ ¿µÀÛ±³Á¤ °Ô½ÃÆÇÀº
ÀÌ¿ëÀÌ ¾î·Á¿î Á¡ ¾çÇØ ºÎŹ µå¸³´Ï´Ù.
04