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Every employee is evaluated from a company. Even if we think we are doing great, but others may have different thoughts because there are many people who did so much better than us. Therefore, we should focus on persuading them that what we¡¯re doing is good to enough.

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Good day, Judy!

This is a very accurate summary! All the things you have mentioned in the summary are correct. Such is the condition and situation in a work place. Now that you know it, someday, you will know what to do to be a good employee. otherwise, if you build a company, you can see the dynamics of the people working with, for, and against each other.

Great job! See you soon.

-T. Donna~

Every employee is evaluated from a company. 
>> Correct!
Or: Every employee is evaluated in a company.

Even if we think we are doing great, but others may have different thoughts because there are many people who did so much better than us. 
>> Even if we think that we are doing great, others may have different thoughts because there are many people who are doing so much better than us. 

Therefore, we should focus on persuading them that what we¡¯re doing is good to enough.
>> Therefore, we should focus on persuading them that what we¡¯re doing is good enough.
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