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What is the best advice you could give to a teenager nowadays?

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I'm not sure what to say to a teenager cause I haven't lived enough. ¤»¤»¤»! But If I have a sister or brother, I'd say that "Listen to your mind". Cause the more people young, the more people can be easily effected by the others. Of course listening other's opinion is important too. But what you like, what you don't like, how you feel are more important. And these things are only improved by practicing. As a result, you can make a better choice, be more happier, get solid values.
To practice these things, I recommend you to write diary. (If you're worried for others to read yours, cell phone or laptop would be good.) Write down today's happy moment or bad moment. If these are gathered, you would know how to deal with your problems.

Gina teacher thanks for teaching me today too! I think I should change the time so If I change it back to dinner time, I'll let you know. Thanks ❤️

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Hi Erin, 

Thank you for sharing your insight about my question. ^^
I agree with listening to their own thoughts and doing what they really want to be happy is very important. 
As long as they keep their good values and stay disciplined, I think there should be no problems regarding it. 

And yes, writing a diary or a journal is one of the best ways to release stress and express our thoughts. 
This is also becoming popular among the teens in my country- especially for young ladies. I think writing is for everyone who likes to do it no matter the age is. I enjoy writing on my journal everyday. ^^ 

No worries, Erin. I hope to talk to you again once you change back your time. ^^ Please take care always! Thank you so much! ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina 


I'm not sure what to say to a teenager cause I haven't lived enough. ¤»¤»¤»! But If I have a sister or brother, I'd say that "Listen to your mind". Cause the more people young, the more people can be easily effected by the others. Of course listening other's opinion is important too. But what you like, what you don't like, how you feel are more important. And these things are only improved by practicing. As a result, you can make a better choice, be more happier, get solid values.
To practice these things, I recommend you to write diary. (If you're worried for others to read yours, cell phone or laptop would be good.) Write down today's happy moment or bad moment. If these are gathered, you would know how to deal with your problems.

Gina teacher thanks for teaching me today too! I think I should change the time so If I change it back to dinner time, I'll let you know. Thanks ❤️


>> I'm not sure what to say to a teenager cause I haven't lived enough. ¤»¤»¤»! But If I had a sister or brother, I'd say that "Listen to your mind." Cause the younger people are, the more people can be easily affected by others. Of course, listening to others' opinions is important too. But what you like, what you don't like, and how you feel are more important. And these things are only improved by practicing. As a result, you can make a better choice, be happier, and get solid values.
To practice these things, I recommend you write a diary. (If you're worried about others reading yours, a cellphone or laptop would be good.) Write down today's happy moment or bad moment. If these are gathered, you will know how to deal with your problems.

Gina teacher, thanks for teaching me today too! I think I should change the time so If I change it back to dinner time, I'll let you know. Thanks 
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