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I worryed about my late sleep habit
I use always smart phone late ningt
but thesday i get up early
and i'm upset because of my dark circles
even if i don't want to put on makeup, i have to because i look tired or sick

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Hi Tia,

Thank you for taking the time to answer your homework. If you're having trouble sleeping, try making changes to your routine to get the sleep you need. Getting enough sleep is important because it helps keep your mind and body healthy.

~Teacher Cathy

         

I worryed about my late sleep habit

>>I'm worried about my late sleep habit.

I use always smart phone late ningt

>>I always use my smartphone late at night.

but thesday i get up early

>>But these days, I get up early.

and i'm upset because of my dark circles

>>And I'm upset because of my dark circles.

even if i don't want to put on makeup, i have to because i look tired or sick

>>Even if I don't want to put on makeup, I have to because I look tired or sick.

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