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Why are fewer and fewer people getting married?

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2023-12-07 2911

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It's just simple reason. Getting married would cost a lot. For example, it's a kind of different between a single and a couple. It could cost double. And they need to make much more money than before when they have their baby. Also, there is another reason why the house prices keep going up. On top of that, advanced prices too. You know, there is saying in South Korea. Poverty comes back to next generation. It's so sad.

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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille

It's just simple reason. 
>> It's just a simple reason. 
OR >> The reason is just simple.
Getting married would cost a lot. 
>> CORRECT!
For example, it's a kind of different between a single and a couple. 
>> For example, it's a kind of different between single people and a couple. 
It could cost double. 
>> CORRECT!
And they need to make much more money than before when they have their baby. 
>> CORRECT!
Also, there is another reason why the house prices keep going up. 
>> CORRECT!
On top of that, advanced prices too. 
>> On top of that, there are advanced prices too. 
You know, there is saying in South Korea. 
>> CORRECT!
Poverty comes back to next generation. 
>> Poverty comes back to the next generation. 
It's so sad.
>> CORRECT!

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