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How do movies or television influence people\'s behavior?

작성자: 이*윤
2024-02-21 2466

회원님의 영작문

It can be divided into those case that have a positive effect and negative effect.
What has a positive effect is that you can get information easily about something and look back on history.
For example, if there is a program that informs you of information on television, you can get information from program and know what you didn't know if you made a movie with a historical event.
Furthermore, we can discuss the historical event with many people.
However, the negative effect is that you can truly believe what is not true and that you can easily criticize people.
For example, when someone is accused of being a stolen person even though did not steal something by misunderstanding, or the fake news that someone has died.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Yun!
That is why it's best to be more vigilant and mindful of what is going on around you so that individuals do not make decisions based solely on what they hear or what others say.
Chammy
It can be divided into those case that have a positive effect and negative effect.
>>It can be divided into those cases that have a positive and negative effect.
What has a positive effect is that you can get information easily about something and look back on history.
>>Correct
For example, if there is a program that informs you of information on television, you can get information from program and know what you didn't know if you made a movie with a historical event.
>>For example, if there is a television program that informs you, you can receive information from it and learn things you didn't know if you made a movie about a historical event.
Furthermore, we can discuss the historical event with many people.
However, the negative effect is that you can truly believe what is not true and that you can easily criticize people.
>>Correct
For example, when someone is accused of being a stolen person even though did not steal something by misunderstanding, or the fake news that someone has died.
>>For example, when someone is accused of being a thief even though they did not steal anything, or the fake news that someone has died.
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