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I am willing to pay a little more to organic food for my health. I usually use a certain grocery store which sells only organic products. The prices of some products are a little higher than those of the products in other supermarkets. But sometimes organic products have lower prices. Last week I bought organic peaches much lower price. The peaches are blemished. We called that kinds of fruit ugly fruit. Our family know that the fruit with perfect appearance is the result of use of much pesticide.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Thank you for doing your homework. I agree! It wouldn't hurt to pay more to make sure that the food we eat is organic and safer than others. Also, I think the same: fruits and vegetables that look perfect are the ones where pesticides are used, while the bruised ones are normally organic.
- T. Caitlyn
I am willing to pay a little more to organic food for my health. 
>> I am willing to pay a little more for organic food for my health.
I usually use a certain grocery store which sells only organic products. 
>> I usually shop at a certain grocery store that sells only organic products.
The prices of some products are a little higher than those of the products in other supermarkets. 
>> CORRECT
But sometimes organic products have lower prices. 
>> CORRECT
Last week I bought organic peaches much lower price. 
>> Last week, I bought organic peaches at a much lower price.
The peaches are blemished. 
>> The peaches were blemished. 
We called that kinds of fruit ugly fruit. 
>> We call that kind of fruit ugly fruit.
Our family know that the fruit with perfect appearance is the result of use of much pesticide.
>> Our family knows that fruit with a perfect appearance is the result of using a lot of pesticides.
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