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I believe the reason Many people choose to stay at home rather than engage in outdoor activities, is anxiety about interpersonal relationships. This has many negative aspects as it is avoiding fearful situations.

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Happy Friday Ms. Rachel! You¡¯ve made it through another week, and that¡¯s something to be proud of! Keep pushing forward, every step you take, no matter how small, brings you closer to your goals. Use this weekend to recharge, but remember that your hard work and dedication will pay off. Keep striving for greatness! You¡¯ve got this!
I believe that the reason many people choose to stay at home rather than engage in outdoor activities, is anxiety about interpersonal relationships.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
 This has many negative aspects as it is avoiding fearful situations.
>>> CORRECT~!^^
OR>>> This has many negative aspects which can limit personal growth and social development.
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