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When I upset..

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I always try not to be upset easily in minor problem but some incident happens in subway often make me upset. It because of some people who steal my sit in crowding morning subway. When person who is sitting take off the train, the person who standing in front of him/her has a opportunity to take seat, but some people ignore it and take a seat. It always pisses me off. But the same time, I don't want to complain to him/her so I just try to take a deep breath and calm down. Also, I try to think there will be some reason why he/she act like that and not to blame him to much. In addition, I watch fun Youtube clips and Reels to forget about it.

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Hannah,

Thanks for sharing and I'm sorry you have to go through those incidents. Although, these are things that we can't control so we really have to find a way to forget these things.

-Teacher Ash

I always try not to be upset easily in minor problem but some incident happens in subway often make me upset.

>>I always try not to be easily upset with minor problems but some incidents that happen in the subway often makes me mad.

It because of some people who steal my sit in crowding morning subway.

>> It's because of some people who steals my seat in the crowded subway in the morning.

When person who is sitting take off the train, the person who standing in front of him/her has a opportunity to take seat, but some people ignore it and take a seat.

>> When a person who is sitting gets off the train, the person who is standing in front of him/her has an opportunity to take that seat, but some people ignore it and steals that seat.

It always pisses me off.

>> CORRECT

But the same time, I don't want to complain to him/her so I just try to take a deep breath and calm down.

>> However, I don't want to complain to him/her, so I just try to take a deep breath and calm down.

Also, I try to think there will be some reason why he/she act like that and not to blame him to much.

>> I try to think that there must be a reason why he/she acts like that, so I try not to get mad at him or her. 

In addition, I watch fun Youtube clips and Reels to forget about it.

>> In addition, I watch fun YouTube clips and reels to forget about incidents like this.










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