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Once there lived an old man with his three sons in the faraway land of China. Their house was on a hill, a little away from the village. There was a beautiful garden around the house.
All the three sons were handsome and hardworking. The old man wanted to find suitable brides to them. He searched far and wide and found two sisters in another village. They were beautiful and good-natured. The old man was happy. The two elder sons married the two sisters and they began to live happily. Many days passed. Now it was time to the brides to visit their parents¡¯ home. Before leaving, they asked the old man what gift he wanted them to bring. The old man thought for a while. He told them that he had always wanted to carry wind and fire with him. He asked them if they could bring each wrapped in a paper.

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Hello Yumin !!!

We really need to put our best foot forward to achieve a goal in our life especially in learning English.

I know it will be a long process but if we don't give up....we can be happy and successful!!!!

Have a great day ahead!!!!

T. Jeny 


Once there lived an old man with his three sons in the faraway land of China. 
>>correct
Their house was on a hill, a little away from the village. 
>>correct
There was a beautiful garden around the house.
>>correct
All the three sons were handsome and hardworking. 
>>correct
The old man wanted to find suitable brides to them. 
>> The old man wanted to find suitable brides for them
He searched far and wide and found two sisters in another village.
>>correct
 They were beautiful and good-natured.
>>correct
 The old man was happy. 
>>correct
The two elder sons married the two sisters and they began to live happily.
>>correct
 Many days passed. Now it was time to the brides to visit their parents¡¯ home. 
>>Now it was time for the brides to visit their parents¡¯ home
Before leaving, they asked the old man what gift he wanted them to bring.
>>correct
 The old man thought for a while. 
>>correct
He told them that he had always wanted to carry wind and fire with him.
>>correct
 He asked them if they could bring each wrapped in a paper.
>>correct
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