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Work and life balance in academies

작성자: 양*연
2025-02-24 654

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I don't know exactly how most academies manage their staff regarding their work and life balance. But I think many academies don't mind about it. In addition, most of the instructors are registered as freelancers ,they can't make a request for their work conditions including work and life balance. As for my academy, I try to manage their work and life balances. First, our teachers have annual leaves and they can use at any time when they want to. If they get married, they get two week leave.And they have a benefit of traveling abroad once a year, which I cover their cost. After student's exams, our instructors have a short leave and workshop travel.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
Wow! I think your company offers great employee benefits. It's nice to know that you take care of them not only as an employer but also as someone who is concerned about them and their work-life balance.
-T. Caitlyn
I don't know exactly how most academies manage their staff regarding their work and life balance. 
>> CORRECT
But I think many academies don't mind about it. 
>> But I think many academies don't care about it.
In addition, most of the instructors are registered as freelancers ,they can't make a request for their work conditions including work and life balance. 
>> In addition, most instructors are registered as freelancers, so they can't request changes to their work conditions, including work-life balance.
As for my academy, I try to manage their work and life balances. 
>> At my academy, I try to help maintain their work-life balance.
First, our teachers have annual leaves and they can use at any time when they want to. 
>> First, our teachers have annual leave, which they can use anytime they want.
If they get married, they get two week leave.
>> If they get married, they get a two-week leave.
And they have a benefit of traveling abroad once a year, which I cover their cost. 
>> They also have the benefit of traveling abroad once a year, and I cover the cost.
After student's exams, our instructors have a short leave and workshop travel.
>> After students' exams, our instructors get a short leave and go on a workshop trip.
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