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You can search your phone number on the internet from anywhere.

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Today, A similar phenomenon is occuring due to the development of online shopping malls.

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Great job on your essay, Joseph! You clearly understand the dispute and its key points, and you've explained them well. Keep it up!
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The e-commerce business of jules, The Main charcter was energized and the business extended.
>>> Jules, the main character, energized the e-commerce business, leading to its expansion.

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So the phone book is no longer needed.
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