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If Korea pushes through with the plan on boosting the animation industry in the country, how can loc

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회원님의 영작문

Since various graphic designers and animators who work in big international studios are Korean, there is no doubt about the quality of Korean-originated animations. However, there are still challenges regarding the contents and the language barriers. First, I believe famous animations come from the content that is widely accepted by global audiences while keeping originality to differentiate the animation from different countries. Japan is good at making animations that has shared topics while maintaining cultural identity. This characteristic led many people to come to Japan to experience the culture and boost tourism. Secondly there are language barriers. There are some quotes that cannot be overcome by descent translation. This is because that language difference is deeply rooted in the country’s history and culture and this make the global animation companies from English speaking nations. For Korea to boost its’ animation industry, it must overcome the above challenges.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Thank you for this Aciel!

Since various graphic designers and animators who work in big international studios are Korean, there is no doubt about the quality of Korean-originated animations. 
>>>  Since various graphic designers and animators who work in big international studios are Koreans, there is no doubt about the quality of Korean-originated animations. 
However, there are still challenges regarding the contents and the language barriers. 
>>>  correct
First, I believe famous animations come from the content that is widely accepted by global audiences while keeping originality to differentiate the animation from different countries. 
>>>   correct
Japan is good at making animations that has shared topics while maintaining cultural identity. 
>>> OR:  Japan is good at making animations that has shared topics while maintaining its cultural identity. 
This characteristic led many people to come to Japan to experience the culture and boost tourism. 
>>>  correct
Secondly there are language barriers. 
>>> Second, there are language barriers.  
There are some quotes that cannot be overcome by descent translation. 
>>> OR:  There are some quotes that cannot be accurately translated.
This is because that language difference is deeply rooted in the country’s history and culture and this make the global animation companies from English speaking nations. 
>>> OR:  This is because that language difference is deeply rooted in the country’s history and culture and this makes the global animation companies from English speaking nations (become lost in translation).  
For Korea to boost its’ animation industry, it must overcome the above challenges.
>>> correct 
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