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Is having a cast-iron stomach always a good thing? Why or why not?

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Having a cast-iron stomach is a good thing? Sometimes it is a good thing. Because if I have a cast-iron stomach, I can enjoy eating. My stomach is very sensitive. If I eat too much, I feel like vomiting. Long ago I went the emergency, because got a stomachache. I ate cool food and
threw up all night. I felt like died. But if someone have cast-iron stomack, he will don't care his stomach. He can eat much food, and everything. But his body isn't real iron, so he could hurt his body. I think that our body have to care well. So we can live a long time.

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Ms. Eva!
Yes, it is good to have a cast-iron stomach, but sometimes it could be embarrassing, especially if you are not affected by what is happening around you. I remember last week, when we had a small party and most of my friends and I ate the same food. Early the next day, they were talking about how they had a terrible stomachache, while I didn't.  I just pretended that I had to end the discussion. haha
Have a good afternoon!
Aki~


Having a cast-iron stomach is a good thing? Sometimes it is a good thing because if I have a cast-iron stomach, I can enjoy eating.
>>> CORRECT!

My stomach is very sensitive. If I eat too much, I feel like vomiting.
>>> CORRECT!

Long ago I went the emergency, because got a stomachache. I ate cool food and threw up all night. I felt like died.
>>> Long ago, I went to the emergency, because I got a stomachache. I ate cool food and threw up all night. I felt like I was dying.

But if someone have cast-iron stomack, he will don't care his stomach.
>> But if someone has a cast-iron stomach, he won't care about his stomach.

He can eat much food, and everything. But his body isn't real iron, so he could hurt his body.
>>> He can eat a lot of food, and everything. But his body isn't really iron, so he could hurt his body.

I think that our body have to care well. So we can live a long time.
>>> I think that we need to take care of ur bodis well to live a long time.

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