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We should do the orientation for three days before working. Finally, last Thursday we worked in a DI( Drug information) department. We are working in this department for 1 week, so our preceptor gave us some homework after educating a basic theory about searching program. We had lunch time for only one hour, so we should eat lunch rapidly in hospital restaurant. After lunch , we found some information about sample medicines. It was very interesting but one of my peers finished that very early, so we should search information about more samples. It took more time so we left work after 3PM, but I was happy because it's still early hours. I really satisfy this internship so far. Please I can keep this mind for 9 weeks.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I'm glad to know that everything's going well so far. ^^
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We should do the orientation for three days before working. 
>>Correct
OR: We have to finish the three-day orientation before working.

Finally, last Thursday we worked in a DI( Drug information) department. 
>>Correct
OR: Finally, last Thursday we started working in the DI Department.
We are working in this department for 1 week, so our preceptor gave us some homework after educating a basic theory about searching program. 
>>We are working in this department for 1 week, so our preceptor gave us some homework after teaching us a basic theory about the searching program. 
We had lunch time for only one hour, so we should eat lunch rapidly in hospital restaurant. 
>>We had a one-hour lunch time, so we had to eat lunch fast in the hospital restaurant.
After lunch , we found some information about sample medicines. 
>>Correct
OR: After lunch, we looked for information about sample drugs
.
It was very interesting but one of my peers finished that very early, so we should search information about more samples. 
>>It was very interesting but one of my peers finished that very early, so we should search information about other samples. 
It took more time so we left work after 3PM, but I was happy because it's still early hours. 
>>Correct
OR: We had an overtime, but I was happy because it was still early when we left.

I really satisfy this internship so far. 
>>I'm really satisfied with this internship so far.
Please I can keep this mind for 9 weeks.
>>I hope to have this kind of feeling for 9 weeks.

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