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Hi Hyeon Yeong. Great job on your homework! I reviewed the sentences you submitted, and everything was correct. You showed a clear understanding of the sentence structure, and I¡¯m proud of the effort you put into completing it. 


Just a small reminder: please make sure to use proper capitalization, especially when writing proper nouns like "English." Capitalizing words like names of languages, countries, or people is important in making your writing more accurate and polished. Hopefully, this exercise will serve as a strong foundation for you to compose complete sentences confidently and use them naturally in your English conversations. Keep up the great work!


~ T. Lia


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I study english at 10pm
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I eat dinner at 8pm
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