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Yes, There are a lot of apartment in my area. I think our area is good for living with family. First, our university has a library , playground and walking trail. And there are elementary schools, middle schools even a high school. So a lot of students live near my house. Some of my friends live in apartment not studio apartment because she live in share house.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing. 
I guess you found a good place to stay then. ^^
Living in a house that you share with others can be uncomfortable sometimes.
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Yes, There are a lot of apartment in my area. 
>>Yes, there are a lot of apartments in my area.
OR: Yes. There are a lot of apartments in my area.
I think our area is good for living with family. 
>>Correct
OR: I think our area is a good place to live in if you have a family.
First, our university has a library , playground and walking trail. 
>>Correct
OR: One good point is, our university has a library, playground, and walking trail.

And there are elementary schools, middle schools even a high school. 
>>Correct
OR: There are schools like elementary, middle, and high school too.

So a lot of students live near my house. 
>>Correct
OR: Because of that, many students live near my house.

Some of my friends live in apartment not studio apartment because she live in share house.
>>
Some of my friends live in an apartment which is not a studio apartment because she lives in a shared house.
OR: Some of my friends live in a house that they share with others.

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