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If you are going to build a statue for someone, who would it be and why?

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If l going to build a statue, I will build my father statue. A lot of great person build it already. But we don't have a common person's statue. In the world have a lot of common person, they move the world. But we remember great person, don't remember common person. My father was common person. He worked hard and grew his child to the best his ability. He had never broken the law. He was good father, good husband and good son. So I want to build his statue that common person like us.

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Good morning!
What a noble gesture to build your father a statue. That shows that he left a great impact on your life, perhaps on your community as well. Thank you for this!
Have a great day
Aki~


If l going to build a statue, I will build my father statue.
>>> If l going to build a statue, I will build my father's statue.

A lot of great person build it already. But we don't have a common person's statue.
>>> A lot of great people have built it already. But we don't have a common person's statue.

In the world have a lot of common person, they move the world. But we remember great person, don't remember common person.
>>> In the world, have a lot of common people who move the world. But we remember a great person, not a common person.

My father was common person. He worked hard and grew his child to the best his ability.
>>>  My father was A common person. He worked hard and raised his children to the best his ability.

He had never broken the law. He was good father, good husband and good son.
>>> He had never broken the law. He was a good father, husband, and son.

So I want to build his statue that common person like us.
>>>  So I want to build his statue as a common person like us.

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