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In the past, many people placed more weight on job stability than job satisfaction. They pursued the concept "lifelong job" when they chose the company or the field. However, as the society has changed rapidly with new technology, any companies haven't ensured the lifelong employment of their employees. Also, the young people always look for another company while working for a company to improve their career or meet their satisfaction. As for young people, job satisfaction is more important than job stability.

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Hi, Gi Yean! 
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this topic. As we discussed in class, sometimes generational differences affect priorities. Older generations aim for job stability, while younger ones seek satisfaction. That¡¯s why, nowadays, many companies are trying to promote work-life balance.
- T. Caitlyn 
In the past, many people placed more weight on job stability than job satisfaction. 
>> CORRECT
They pursued the concept "lifelong job" when they chose the company or the field. 
>> They pursued the concept of a 'lifelong job' when choosing a company or a field.
However, as the society has changed rapidly with new technology, any companies haven't ensured the lifelong employment of their employees. 
>> However, as society has rapidly changed due to new technology, no companies have ensured lifelong employment for their employees.
Also, the young people always look for another company while working for a company to improve their career or meet their satisfaction. 
>> Also, young people often look for another company while working to improve their careers or achieve job satisfaction.
As for young people, job satisfaction is more important than job stability.
>> CORRECT
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