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If I could swtich lives with someone for a day, I would switch with my father. I want to know how it is like to be a parent. I want to understand the emotions and attentiveness of parents toward their children. I believe that I would be comprehending my parents' perspectives more fully by switching lives for a day.
The reason that I especially chose my father rather than my mom is because I spend much lesser time with my father. He's usually out for work that I had less chances to communicate or spend time with him. Switching lives with him will help me to get to know him more deeply. Moreover, since he is a head of household I would be understanding the burden of that position, which I'm curious of. I think switching lives would be the only way to feel exact burden of it, and in that way I'll have more potent respectation to my father.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! A lot of people might choose a celebrity or someone famous, but choosing your dad says a lot about how much you value your family. Experiencing his day-to-day life would definitely help you understand the weight he carries and how he expresses love in his own way. I think it’s really touching that you want to connect with him on a deeper level and gain a new kind of respect for him.
-T. Sonny
If I could swtich lives with someone for a day, I would switch with my father. 
>>If I could switch lives with someone for a day, I would switch with my father.
I want to know how it is like to be a parent. 
>>Correct!
I want to understand the emotions and attentiveness of parents toward their children. 
>>Correct!
I believe that I would be comprehending my parents' perspectives more fully by switching lives for a day.
>>I believe that by switching lives for a day, I would be able to better understand my parents’ perspectives.

The reason that I especially chose my father rather than my mom is because I spend much lesser time with my father. 
>>The reason I chose my father rather than my mother is because I spend much less time with him.
He's usually out for work that I had less chances to communicate or spend time with him. 
>>He’s usually out working, so I’ve had fewer chances to communicate or spend time with him.
Switching lives with him will help me to get to know him more deeply. 
>>Switching lives with him would help me get to know him more deeply.

Moreover, since he is a head of household I would be understanding the burden of that position, which I'm curious of. 
>>Moreover, since he is the head of our household, I would gain insight into the weight of that responsibility, which I’m very curious about.
I think switching lives would be the only way to feel exact burden of it, and in that way I'll have more potent respectation to my father.
>>I think switching lives would be the only way to truly feel the burden he carries, and through that, I would develop a deeper sense of respect for my father.
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